Last night I finished up writing chapter 11 with Adrian’s POV .
If you haven’t read my other post he is the 2nd love interest to Sirena who is the main character of course. ( I will delve deeper into him in another post but I mention him in the video the Last Arctos Pack . Take a look.)
The chapter 11 which was entitled hangover concluded with 2322 words.
Most of the words was taken from my first draft. Which was in another chapter all together in the first draft.
I feel like in this draft I placed it in the right section. And gives a good lead up to what’s to come in my next chapters.
The section of the chapter 11 that ended it up with Adrian’s POV was entitled INTERRUPTIONS .
I named the section INTERRUPTIONS because. Adrian interrupts things and gets interrupted in his goals. Adrian has never seen a mortal. This is his first interaction in the mortal town. (In my novel it’s the name for humans. I don’t use the term humans in my novel. ) It’s just his reaction to what he sees. To him in this chapter , even though the town is small he sees it as too busy and too noisy . He can hear everything since he is a werewolf and their laughs (that he calls brays), and the sounds that they make hurt his ears. He interrupts a street hockey game and gets into a fight because of the laughter he hears from them.
He interacts with Sirena again but not in a good way because their meeting is interrupted by the town’s police (which I Call a spider agent) named Henri D and his dog Storm. This character is not a new character but was actually introduced briefly in chapter 3. He is actually important to Adrian’s character arc which will be revealed in later chapters.
But he actually interrupts Adrian’s encounter with Sirena. Adrian decided not to leave the mountain without his sister who in this chapter he calls very stubborn for her loyalty to Cristan. So since he chooses not to leave his whole goal within this chapter is to figure out what Sirena is all about just to spite Cristen. Because Cristan lied to them about Sirena. But obviously because of Henri D he doesn’t get the chance. So the chapter ends with him catching Sirena’s scent and following her as she hurries off with her friend Eli up the mountain.
So I feel I’m putting more emphasis to pairing him up with Sirena than Cristan because right now he is interacting more with Sirena than Cristan is. But I will see what happens in this next chapter 12.
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