Completed yet another scene for my 14th chapter in my 2nd draft . 2750 words, not all in one day though.
This scene features the main love interest Cristen’s POV where he has to struggle and come to terms with his mother lying to him about who Sirena really was and is in fact also a werewolf like them.
This scene is yet another confrontation with him and Adrian about who Sirena really is and what she means to the yearling pack at this point .
This scene does contain a flashback scene with Cristen interacting with both his parents before they were killed .
In the flashback scene it reveals that Cristen’s mother gave him Sirena’s father’s journal that tells who she is. But his mother tells him no matter what happens don’t ever read the book just give it to Sirena when the time comes. And she also has him believe that Sirena is just a human girl.
So this is why he as my character is seen struggling.
He is supposed to be an alpha but doesn’t know the truth to anything . And he is mad because his rival Adrian knows more about Sirena than he does himself.
And the thing is in my story is that he cannot be challenged as an alpha unless he is in the community of werewolves during their ritual bluffing ceremonies . So Adrian tries to make little small jabs at Cristen whenever he can get the opportunity to because Cristen knows that Adrian wants to be the alpha of the yearling pack.
So this is the point of where I’m at and at the end of the scene Cristen screams towards Adrian ,
” Until we get to Aquilum, don’t you dare challenge me again,” he said. Before Adrian or anyone could object Cristen picked up the book and raced out the door.
Adrian just spilled the info that Cristen is the one who killed Gabby in the mountains.
The next chapter will be back in Sirena’s POV . I’ll keep you updated on this next scene within chapter 14. I’m thinking about combining two scenes into one for that scene .
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